Revision Introduction

I have many creative ideas that I enjoy incorporating into my essays. However I often tend to go off subject, because I get lost in my train of thought, and when it comes down to punctuating my skills need some work. These errors were clearly demonstrated in my first paper I wrote for my English 101 class. In this paper we were expected to write about identity with supporting evidence from our week’s readings, with paragraph coherency and thesis driven. My essay struggled in all these areas. My supporting evidence was lacking proper citations. The paragraphs weren’t separated properly as I changed topics and my thesis became lost in my paper. However through thorough editing this experience taught me how to organize my paper more effectively and properly cite my sources.